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Mar 25 2008

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One Single Impression: Spring

Posted at 12:01 am under Haiku, One Single Impression

Azaleas, wake!
Dogwoods, lift open your eyes,
Take your first breath, Spring!

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14 Witty Remarks to “One Single Impression: Spring”

  1. Mybellaviaon 25 Mar 2008 at 5:50 am 1

    Great ku! The flowering trees are a fresh breath of Spring!

  2. SandyCarlsonon 25 Mar 2008 at 7:11 am 2

    Oh, the voice that bids life into being! I love it.

  3. Danielle Says Helloon 25 Mar 2008 at 7:16 am 3

    It was actually almost freezing last night….glad I didn’t get those azaleas for the front yet…viewing your photos of them has me longing for some of my own. I am planning to get some this weekend ;)

  4. Heidion 25 Mar 2008 at 7:58 am 4

    Cute poem and I love the flowers. I can’t wait until ours start to bloom. Happy Spring!

  5. Daniel J Santoson 25 Mar 2008 at 9:38 am 5

    very beautiful, excellent.

  6. Ravenon 25 Mar 2008 at 10:05 am 6

    All the pretty flowers are such a feast for the eyes. And your poem is lovely.

  7. gafarmwomanon 25 Mar 2008 at 10:05 am 7

    What beautiful azaleas and a wonderful poem too.
    Enjoyed my visit so much.

  8. donG hOon 25 Mar 2008 at 12:19 pm 8

    never seen an azaleas yet. but they look beautiful in this picture.

  9. spacedlawon 25 Mar 2008 at 12:44 pm 9

    A breath of fresh air and a lovely scent in this poem.

  10. OneMoreBelieveron 25 Mar 2008 at 2:29 pm 10

    takes your very breath away!…. azaleas are flowers with color beyond my comprehension….

  11. Marianneon 25 Mar 2008 at 6:14 pm 11

    I’m hooked. Loved it.

  12. Andréeon 25 Mar 2008 at 6:19 pm 12

    This is so great: I love the energy and triumph in this poem. It is so positive. It reminds me of Bach somehow.

  13. TeriCon 25 Mar 2008 at 11:00 pm 13

    Love this command for spring to make an appearance.

  14. gautami tripathyon 26 Mar 2008 at 8:47 am 14

    Beautiful picture. I like the verse too!

    reverently renewed

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